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Bleed
Contributed by
DamagedAndBroken
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Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 04:27:25 PM in AEST
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You said you'd be there for me,
But that's all over now..
You left me here to bleed,
cold and alone,
damaged and broken.
You've spoken to me
with cruel words..
I find myself
at the end,
I've got to take my heart off of the shelf..
Pure sorrow my fled my heart
Because there was no answer
And now I'm trying to find a simple cure for the cancer..
Copyright ©
DamagedAndBroken
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2004-04-22 16:27:25]
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Re: Bleed
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by Remy on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 04:31:02 PM AEST
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if only the cure was simple, it's always screwy and complex and takes time to figure out... augh, oh well. hey ya, nearly forget - great write!! ;0)
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Re: Bleed
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by lonely_kakashi on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 05:01:04 PM AEST
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good write- dont think theres much else to say :)
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Re: Bleed
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by Mortis-Dark on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 05:46:04 PM AEST
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What can I say it was brilliant :D
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Re: Bleed
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by shelby on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 05:52:48 PM AEST
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heartbreaking write I know these feelings well.
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Re: Bleed
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by deathdrop on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 01:50:07 AM AEST
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pain rising poem, but good all the same. i think we've all been left out in the cold and dark at some point of our lives, despite it being to do with, love, friendship, etc. we all know your pain.
i hope that you do find your answers.
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Re: Bleed
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 12:09:14 PM AEST
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If only things were as easy as they seem. I hope things get better for you. I can relate but not to the full extent.. great job though.
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