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I'll Always Be Here
Contributed by
lifefliesby
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Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 05:29:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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It's all over now
As it was before
But I know I'll feel sore
Right down to my core
It feels wrong again
To break away
I forget what I say
I still have love to pay
I know I'll love you
FOREVER AND ALWAYS
But it's just friends we can be
We've tried every way
And I just needed a break
But I already said
That just friends we will make
Nothing more til we're dead
You said it was wrong
As you said before
We were nothing for too long
Love turned into a chore
I know I'll love you
FOREVER AND ALWAYS
But it's just friends we can be
We've tried every way
And though it did
And it shouldn't
I tried again
Hopeing to god
It's US I could mend
It makes me so sad
To know 'never again'
I will never think bad
And it's love I will send
I know I'll love you
FOREVER AND ALWAYS
But it's just friends we can be
We've tried every way
If you ever want to try again
I will always be here
With open arms and open hands
And a face full of cheer
I will always remember the times we shared
And the love I KNOW was there
And I know we could have made it work
If we both had truley cared
I know I'll love you
FOREVER AND ALWAYS
But it's just friends we can be
We've tried every way
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2004-04-22 17:29:07]
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Re: I'll Always Be Here
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by liquidsunshine on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 05:34:17 PM AEST
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I just... *sigh*
Well, it IS a good poem... but...
No.
Friends forever and always.
Please, smile for me. |
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Re: I'll Always Be Here
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by shelby on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 05:38:23 PM AEST
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well done
michelle |
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Re: I'll Always Be Here
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by Rhei76 on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 06:15:59 PM AEST
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| Beautiful. It sounds Like the feelings of an old friend Talking to me thru your hands, mind, and emotion. Beautiful. |
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Re: I'll Always Be Here
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by kidpoet_213 on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 06:46:27 PM AEST
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Beautifully written... reminds me of something I might write lol... it's a good poem full o emotion... of just trying to let go easy... and not all at once love d it!! Keep writing...
~Donna~ |
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Re: I'll Always Be Here
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by Remy on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 07:45:46 PM AEST
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hum... this seems way too familiar, as if you were going through some old journals of mine! augh... great write... ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: I'll Always Be Here
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by chris3btine77 on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 10:06:07 PM AEST
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this also reminds me of some of my work
i really like how you keep repeating the forever and always |
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