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Where Does My Loved One Cry?
Contributed by
MorbidMongrel
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Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 09:16:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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Where does my loved one cry?
I can hear their voice
In the darkness of the night
Where are you?
My hand reaches out
Searching through the mist
It keeps me awake at night
Do you know that I care
And that I'll always be here?
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I never meant to to that...
To err so badly
And force a rift in your heart
Please, come back
I'm right where you left me
Sobbing and shivering on the ground...
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2004-04-22 21:16:29]
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Re: Where Does My Loved One Cry?
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by lil_angel on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 09:28:13 PM AEST
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Well done! I really REALLY liked this stanza
It keeps me awake at night
Do you know that I care
And that I'll always be here?
Very well done! |
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