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The Awful Silence
Contributed by
dAWn
on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 08:22:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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The Awful Silence
Come on chug something on me to shut me up you know you want to I know you want to don't let me be the only one to talk like always lets at least keep quiet *together*
see that smile on my face it lies those eyes laugh at you they're cold don't feel don't care
What do I care for? Why should I care for?
I can say things that go right through your soul I see through you that scares you to death still I get no response and you know I'm right that scares you to death listen to the voice in your head keeps telling you the same keeps whispering my name that scares you to death still I get no response
I laugh myself to sleep I'm loosing my mind I'm going insane by your side it terrifies you still I get no response so I keep repeating like the voice in my head it tells me so I should let you go ... can't such a coward, eh?
Speak to me! Speak to me now! Answer me! Answer me now! I need to hear you I need to know Anytime, anyway, anyhow!
When was the last time you gave me a smile? You just shuffle your hands their sweatty you want to flood the world or what? I smirked at my own insults Abusing you? Yes because you let me to still I get no response
So much time wasted upon contemplating Is it worth it? This relationship? This whole pile of ...? Am I worth you? Even better- Are you worth me?
no
K, now that this is settled I guess I'll go And don't turn back cause I know you wont ask me to stay and even if you'll wont get a response...
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dAWn
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2004-04-23 08:22:42] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Awful Silence
(User Rating: 1 ) by tweaks2004 on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 08:38:47 AM AEST (User
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Very good write. sorry that you had to get in this mood i know how you feel. :) |
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Re: The Awful Silence
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 08:42:06 AM AEST (User
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intense write vivid raw emotions.
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Re: The Awful Silence
(User Rating: 1 ) by Black13 on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 08:42:09 AM AEST (User
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Very unique write. This reminded me of a rant and was versed just right. Very good indeed. |
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