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Look In The Mirror
Contributed by
blackmarker
on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 12:05:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Look in the mirror,
What do I see?
Distorted images,
Are haunting me.
Look in the mirror,
What do I view?
If I said I like what I see,
That would be untrue.
Look in the mirror,
What do I observe?
The unattractive thing looking back at me,
Is no more than I deserve.
Look in the mirror,
What do I perceive?
Feel like the ugly duckling,
And all I do is grieve.
Look in the mirror,
I cant take it anymore,
So Ill break the glass,
Watch the shards fall to the floor.
Look in the mirror,
No longer there,
Broken things, so hard to fix,
I am in repair.
Look in the mirror,
Can you tell Im broken?
My love for you, killing me now,
The truth Ive never spoken.
Look in the mirror,
Will you finally notice me?
Once Im gone, read the note,
My last and final plea.
It will read,
It was all for you,
My life, and my death.
I will think of you,
As I take my final breath.
You never really saw me before,
But now you know how I feel.
I hope it eats you up inside,
But that you learn to deal.
I couldnt do it,
Im not that strong,
I cant stand being alone,
I just wanted to belong.
You couldnt do that for me,
And now its too late,
But know one thing,
For you, in heaven, I will wait.
Maybe then youll see me,
And we can be together.
Until then, please think of me,
And forget me never.?
Look in the mirror,
What do I see?
Distorted images,
Are haunting me.
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blackmarker
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2004-04-23 12:05:38]
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Re: Look In The Mirror
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by spooky on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 12:16:11 PM AEST
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| I always thought beauty was in the eye's of the beholder,,if they care,they will see just as you are,,a friend in words,,spooky |
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Re: Look In The Mirror
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by Remy on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 02:32:31 PM AEST
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methinks you look into the mirror a wee bit much... lol, interesting write, i liked it! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Look In The Mirror
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by xoblondiebabix3 on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 11:27:42 PM AEST
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I really liked this poem a lot:)
Post all ur poems theyre awesome!!
I can relate to this poem very much
~*xObeaOx*~ |
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