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Tic - Tock
Contributed by
jaeann
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Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 03:15:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
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time cares for no one's sins
time gives you everything to believe in
one time you're not enough
the next you're way too much
time leaves you afraid of all you touch
time
don't mean a thing
if all it can bring
is sorrow that stings
time
is a solid waste
once should never haste
nor attempt to be chaste
time
drags endlessly on
with too many hats to don
and can be such a lonely con
time
always stands still
right before your fill
yet after the pretty pill
time is the one that hurts
time is it's just dessert
never waver .....never fall
time is the justice of us all
time
is someone's wicked curse
a free ride in anyone's hearse
an ill you need to nurse
time
is never free
is all it will ever be
but ever again, you'll not see
time
does not mend
to your will never bend
a new day it will always send
time leaves the memories a mess
time leaves all the answers to guess
always lost.....forever blue
time will come for every one of you
Copyright ©
jaeann
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2004-04-23 15:15:27]
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Re: Tic - Tock
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by shelby on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 03:19:01 PM AEST
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you hit the nail right on the head with this one seems time is going faster these days times cruel punishment awwwwwww great poem. Id give this a 100 if we had it but we will have to do the five stars!
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by youlied on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 03:21:20 PM AEST
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| Time is such a complex, yet inspirational subject....I love this poem, you did a really good job... |
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Re: Tic - Tock
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by lil_angel on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 03:23:08 PM AEST
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| Interesting Job good job! |
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Re: Tic - Tock
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 03:24:27 PM AEST
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Good concept...well done...
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Re: Tic - Tock
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by Black13 on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 03:24:50 PM AEST
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Holy cr*p! This was an incredibly good poem. I haven't read any of yours in a while but I have got to say that this one is your absolute best. It was one of the better poems I've read here.
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Re: Tic - Tock
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 05:36:53 PM AEST
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ohh jaeann, this is breathtakingly beautiful, i love poems about time:) thanx for sharing! this is wonderful:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Tic - Tock
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by New_York_Chick on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 06:20:45 PM AEST
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| great poem, so honest, bitter sweet |
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Re: Tic - Tock
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by Kie on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 07:33:46 PM AEST
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Great poets with interesting minds inspire me by reading their poetry. YOu have inspired me and i'll probably right all night. LOL!
I am fascinated by time. That one word can pop up so many outlets.
Your poem was awesome and the ending gave me those little chill bumps and I liked that...
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Re: Tic - Tock
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 02:45:38 AM AEST
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A great write a really enjoyable read.
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