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My Safe
Contributed by
youlied
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Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 03:16:08 PM in AEST
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Here's where I sit
Alone and cold
Bound by my hate
My personal tendencies
I wish to be there
Alone and cold
Bound by a blanket
Of my own choices
I'll show you sometime
Alone together
Cold together
Bound by this passion
That keeps us alive
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youlied
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2004-04-23 15:16:08]
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Re: My Safe
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by lil_angel on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 03:18:26 PM AEST
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| Good job! This is really well! Good write! |
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Re: My Safe
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by Black13 on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 03:22:43 PM AEST
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| This rang bells for me and spoke volumes in so few words. Nice work. |
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Re: My Safe
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by Remy on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 03:20:08 PM AEST
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kept alive by seething hatred? tough life man... but makes some interesting writing! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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