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The Castle
Contributed by
lil_angel
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Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 03:43:21 PM in AEST
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The walls are high and strong
The guards stand tall
For this castle has to be protected
This castle used to be open
To the public at no cost
But now very few may enter
Why, Why did this have to happen?
When and How?
The answer is simple
This castle will not be burned again
If you have the keys you may enter
If not walk away
October 5th 2001
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Re: The Castle
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by Jackee_line on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 03:57:29 PM AEST
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I like the way you used the castle .
Brilliant!!!! |
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Re: The Castle
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 04:17:27 PM AEST
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| interesting little write... so many interpretations possible... good writing!! |
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Re: The Castle
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by crap_snapper on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 04:21:47 PM AEST
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really good poem.
i like castles loads too, |
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Re: The Castle
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by PoeticReign on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 04:42:18 PM AEST
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Good use of metaphor, Angel!
I hope you have found someone who has learned to use the keys to your heart :)
~PR |
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Re: The Castle
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by Kie on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 07:36:19 PM AEST
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I love castles. You know castles were commisioned in the past by kings as strongholds for land and security. They were basically a world within a world. The way they were built was simply fascinating. The way they fell just as much so.
Enjoyed your poem and loved the ending. The last two lines were great.
Kie |
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Re: The Castle
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by Remy on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 03:26:15 PM AEST
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interesting... i like castles... lol, great write! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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