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Fake Smiles
Contributed by
MusicGurl3291
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Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 04:31:19 PM in AEST
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She comes home,
With an award,
her parents congradulate her,
as if they were bored.
She walks out of the house,
without a goodbye,
She walks down the hallway,
with a tear in her eye.
She sits on the chair,
as the pain curls up inside,
but when someone asks,
She denies.
People dont see by the look in her eye,
that she's crying inside,yet they cant ask why.
She wants to go home,
where she can lie in bed,
then she could forget all the things people said.
She could walk an inch, a yard a mile,
and people wouldnt notice her fake little smiles.
These fake smiles get her through the days,
all the troubles in her life,
and all the delays.
One day she'll break free,
She'll tell people to let her be.
She'll grow up proudly, determaned, and honest,
and she will prove to people,
that she's so much more,
than they thought she was before.
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Re: Fake Smiles
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by sicknivesevered on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 05:07:42 PM AEST
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Well, this was groovy. There was a little bit of contradiction, though. "but when someone asks,
She denies" & "yet they cant ask why ". But overall, I think its spanktacular. |
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Re: Fake Smiles
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by Merry on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 05:39:47 PM AEST
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well done - often we are igonred or passed by - we smile when we want to cry - but you have a good outlook of overcoming this life you have now - and one day you will stand proud and your smiles will be for real -
yours in poetry
merry |
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Re: Fake Smiles
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by xoblondiebabix3 on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 09:24:19 PM AEST
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this is probably one of the best poems ive read
it was really really good
I agree with every single line! AWESOME WRITE! luved it a lot!
I feel the exact same way
GOOD JOB!!
~*xObeaOx*~
p.s... I'm glad i read this;) lol |
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Re: Fake Smiles
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by kidpoet_213 on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 09:47:09 PM AEST
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Awesome write... U know what? We all do the fake smiles sometimes... when we don't want ppl to know what's really going on inside... I can relate to every line of this poem... believe me life will get better...
~Donna~ |
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