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The Lasr Time I stand
Contributed by
pyrofungus
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Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 06:40:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I feel like I'm sinking,
Sinking farther and farther down.
I'm unable to get up,
I'm choking once again.
I can't bear my life.
I can't feel my happiness
Because it's no longer there
I want to have my life back,
To be able to feel happy once more.
But all I'm feeling is myself sinking,
Sinking farther and farther
Below myself.
I think I'm slowly dying,
In this pool of blood I stand.
I want to end it all completely.
So for this last time I will stand
I will no longer sink
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2004-04-23 18:40:29]
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Re: The Lasr Time I stand
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by lil_angel on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 07:21:06 PM AEST
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| This is really good! Excellent job! |
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Re: The Lasr Time I stand
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 09:33:16 PM AEST
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| interesting. nice write. |
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