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Drowning
Contributed by
sarah_may
on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 08:01:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Drowning
Drowning in a pool of Despair,
Reaching for something thats no longer there.
Slipping silently under the surface,
Realizing suddenly, nothing is worth this.
Drowning in a pool of Agony,
No one can help unless they can see.
This is the end of the rope,
Useless. Pointless. There is no more hope.
Drowning in a pool of Misery,
No one can hear, despite the plea.
Help, help, is the cry,
Life is over; time to die.
Drowning in a pool of Suffering,
The light above is disappearing.
All feeling is no more,
Its time to go where angels soar.
Drowning in a pool of Despair,
Reaching for something thats no longer there.
Slipping silently under the surface,
Realizing suddenly, nothing is worth this.
Copyright ©
sarah_may
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2004-04-23 20:01:25]
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Re: Drowning
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by sicknivesevered on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 08:06:55 PM AEST
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| Groovy flow. I pray for the best during your surgery. |
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Re: Drowning
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by sarah_may on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 08:08:24 PM AEST
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okay! ppl, i dont care if you dont like it, just leave SOMETHING! i havent posted ANY poetry since last year and ive been dying to share it with ppl so ANY review would be great because im in serious needing of feeling good rite now! - if ur gonna read it, PLEASE say something!:D
sarah mai |
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Re: Drowning
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by sarah_may on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 08:10:35 PM AEST
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| thank you thank you thank you |
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Re: Drowning
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by hearmyvoice on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 08:16:35 PM AEST
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| very nice poem! I hope all goes well! |
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Re: Drowning
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by Brians_Sweety on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 08:30:20 PM AEST
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That was an awesome poem!! I hope that your surgery goes well. I will be praying for you. I would just like to let you know I also had a major surgery when I was 14 and I have lived to talk about it I am sure you will do the same
Stephanie |
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Re: Drowning
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by xoblondiebabix3 on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 09:05:58 PM AEST
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I can really relate to what you're going through.. I luved this one it was AwEsOmE!!!!*:-)
HoPe ThINgs Go BeTtR fOr Ya EvEn ThO ThEy DiDnT rIlLY fOr mE..
LyL.
~*xObeaOx*~ |
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Re: Drowning
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by kidpoet_213 on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 09:07:08 PM AEST
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Sarah May...
U did great... awesome poem... all the best to u...
I'll be praying for u...
Break the surface and take a deep breath...
God's angels is watching over u...
Drown no more... but in His love for u...
~Donna~ |
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Re: Drowning
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 10:40:02 PM AEST
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| buenos suerte. excelente |
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Re: Drowning
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 01:09:06 PM AEST
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| This is awsome... really powerful... and touching. I am only 13, and I can't imagine what it must be like. I pray all goes well in your surgery... you have a wonderful talent. I hope this poem was only a way to relieve anxiety... You got the point across beautifully! |
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Re: Drowning
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 06:24:56 PM AEST
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this is sweetz_48913@yahoo.com
ive been through almost everything you have wrote about if you want 2 talk e-mail me
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