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CoMMoN SeNSe MeNTioN
Contributed by
strange_lindsey
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Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 09:00:22 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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To have and to hold
For richer and poorer
Common sense mention
In a dirty double crossing affair.
Sneaking in through the open window
Holding your breath, making no moise
Common sense mention
In trouble with the law and plagued by infidelity.
She sits by the door
Consentrating on the pitch black night
Common sense mention
Crouched and ready to fight.
Lessen the noose around her neck
Let her go out alone into the world
Common sense mention
You are killing her slowly from the inside, out.
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2004-04-23 21:00:22]
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Re: CoMMoN SeNSe MeNTioN
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by lil_angel on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 10:08:44 PM AEST
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| Good write! |
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Re: CoMMoN SeNSe MeNTioN
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by mountainhigh on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 05:03:50 AM AEST
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Spice in the variety, but the true spice lies in the soul and how many ways to see each facet in its most perfect light.
This facet is another beautiful write. Thank you. |
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Re: CoMMoN SeNSe MeNTioN
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by TheSchroedmeister on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 10:41:27 PM AEST
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"Lessen the noose around her neck"
I love that line, it is a great accent. This I quite enjoyed |
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