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Whom
Contributed by
marsh62287
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Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 12:38:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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who do you like
so tell me now
you say you love he
but yet see
ye do not act like
what i see
but yet you say
you love me
but i need
this girl i see
which may be ye
if ye can see
how much i love ye
so now
whom do you like
so i can see
who shall be
my love to be
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2004-04-24 00:38:50]
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Re: Whom
(User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 01:16:28 AM AEST
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| Good job! This is a really good write! |
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Re: Whom
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by reprobate on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 09:59:56 AM AEST
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liked most of it. i'm not so sure about the switching of language styles(ye and you...)
thanks for sharing |
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