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The World Park.
Contributed by
Thivanka
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Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 12:40:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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The world park.
The wind blows, blows from the east,
A child cries, cries in the heat,
Draped in tears, tears with fear,
Distant is joy, joy so mere.
The wind blows, blows from the west,
A mother cries, cries with the rest,
Caped in pain, pain very dear,
Soaked by evil, evil so sheer.
The wind blows, blows from the south,
A father cries, cries without,
Hear his voice, voice of loss,
Flushed by evil, evil he cannot toss.
The wind blows, blows from the north,
A vagrant cries, cries forth,
All alone, alone in the dark,
Mocked by evil, evil in the park.
Copyright ©
Thivanka
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2004-04-24 00:40:04]
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Re: The World Park.
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by lil_angel on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 01:24:55 AM AEST
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| This is good! Good job! |
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Re: The World Park.
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 04:13:40 PM AEST
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This lays a heavy cape of sorrow on my heart that anyone has to live like this, but sadly millions do. This is a very strong write.
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Re: The World Park.
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Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 04:34:01 PM AEST
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now that was powerful, i loved the thought you have so obviously put into this.
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Re: The World Park.
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 12:26:49 PM AEST
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excellent, from the title that drew me in to very last line, hugs n' love nessa
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