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OUTLOVED
Contributed by
philly
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Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 02:33:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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In the stillness there u are
Like a rose among thorns
So beautiful.. i must look from afar
WIth loveliness are you adorned
My heart can love thee alone
And yet I cannot speak to tell
My love goes unshown
Yet to the dephts of love i have fell
And the tears form in my eyes
But my love i will not reveal
Confessing it only to the empty nights
My wishes cannot be made real
I know that you are not meant to be with me
My longing is my own
And yet your beauty is still wonderful to see
Even when i know i am alone
My heart is broken and yet it will always love
For how could I not adore you..
My angel.. you belong to the skies above
Theres nothing i wouldnt do 4 u
Yet you'll never see or understand
The love in my heart
Becuz you'll never know the man
Who loved you from afar
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philly
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2004-04-24 02:33:52]
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Re: OUTLOVED
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by lil_angel on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 02:44:54 AM AEST
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| Great job! You have a great talent! |
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Re: OUTLOVED
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by bluoreo on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 02:51:54 AM AEST
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| I feel for you. THis is a good write. |
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Re: OUTLOVED
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by Spike on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 05:17:06 AM AEST
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Bittersweet. Have been there too many times, placing a beautiful, disinterested girl on a pedestal and loving from afar. You certainly captured the feeling and situation for me. Well done.
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