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The Parting
Contributed by
spike
on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 04:54:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Goodbye I wave, goodbye,
Unable to hold back the tears, I cry
A veritable flood, an endless stream
But this is reality, not a dream
Eyed through a misty veil
-The parting is real.
There she goes,
And all those years of love and laughter
Ends, as she disappears.
We were once so close!
A lover's chain!
But the links weakened,
Leaving hurt and pain.
Forget, start anew,
The foot has outgrown the shoe
In which it sat so snugly, for so long
And now dances to another tune,
Of a far off beckoning song.
There she goes,
A last wave of her hand
I return it, and wish
I could understand
Goodbye, goodbye. Oh God.
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spike
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2004-04-24 04:54:15]
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Re: The Parting
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by NirvanaLotus on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 04:20:55 PM AEST
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| i only have to say for every parting there is a meeting, when a relationship ends there is good reason. they werent for you. they merely were the begining of who you are ment to be with. |
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Re: The Parting
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by a_bear on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 11:28:48 AM AEST
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The foot has outgrown the shoe... love that line.
it is so short, yet filled with meaning.. Great work. When that happens, things begin to pinch.. |
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