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A Thief’s Revelation
Contributed by
deadranger
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Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 12:51:36 PM in AEST
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And we, are but thorns around a rose,
And we, are but crows amongst a dove,
And we, are but thieves between a king.
II
And I,
Never filled with the light,
An emptiness filled by vile thoughts,
But all that changed,
As I was nailed onto the cross.
III
So I am told it started with three kings,
And now it ends with two thieves and a king,
Why should he die for me?
But then I asked for his forgiveness.
IV
And I, now know my place
And I, shall never forget thy face,
For he has opened his fathers gates,
And I, now can die.
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Re: A Thief’s Revelation
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 01:55:46 PM AEST
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Kudos!
I've seen way too many blah religious writes and I'm sick of them---- you're poem has been a much needed relief of them!!! =)
The way you use to describe things has its own..... style.... it's own..... well I can't describe it, but something about your style just captivates me. I'm speechless!
One thing I might add would be to put a quick bit in at the end about not actually dying but being reborn... I dunnow, leaving it at death doesn't stay too well with the theme of Christ's resurrection..... But what the heck, I loved it all the same =)
Excellently done.
God bless,
Ellen |
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Re: A Thief’s Revelation
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 11:23:24 PM AEST
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| ditto to what ellen said. nice. |
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