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I'll Be Lucky
Contributed by
parkman
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Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 02:23:49 PM in AEST
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I'm going out of my mind, losing it all
I used to be proud, used to stand tall
Now I have fell, my own grave I have dug
Through to much abuse, of alcohol and drugs
I started at twelve, a right Jack the lad
Thought it was fun, didn't realise it was so bad
Only at the weekends, I would have my fill
Not noticing I was using more, to produce the thrill
Four nights a week, it quickly became
Addiction was hitting, it was no game
Couldn't stop, as it grew everyday
My life slowly, slipping away
So here I am now, a shadow of myself
Lost everything, lost all lifes wealth
I'll be lucky, to reach twenty four
I'll be lucky, to reach tomorrow
Copyright ©
parkman
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2004-04-24 14:23:49]
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Re: I'll Be Lucky
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 02:43:49 PM AEST
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a very haunting, disturbing poem... good write.
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Re: I'll Be Lucky
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by Jackee_line on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 03:43:13 PM AEST
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I found this kind of sad.
But a good write indeed. |
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Re: I'll Be Lucky
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 08:54:05 AM AEST
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learn to enjoy the simple things in life (wine, cheese, yawning, bees, newly cut grass ETC)
and then maybe the stress from your substance abuse will go
let it roll let it roll let it roll
let it roll let it roll *hums |
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