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I hate It
Contributed by
poem_lover
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Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 02:37:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I hate it when you say no
I hate it when you speak
I hate it when you smell like beer
I hate it when you drink
I hate it when you get high
and for some reason I hate it when you say good-bye
but most of all I hate myself for hanging out with you
'cause I know your not good for me
'cause you do what you do
you need to get some help
you need to get some courage
you need to get some self-esteem
you need to get a purpose
I am always here to help you
I am always here to lend a hand
but most of all, I am here to care
so, when you feel like you can't go on
when you feel like you're alone
remember that I am here to help you stay storng
and together we can beat this
no matter how long it takes
because we will be best friends,
and remember I will always be here for you.
By: Jo-Anne Stevens
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Re: I hate It
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by Pyrofungus on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 02:46:28 PM AEST
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| wow this reminds me of all the things my friends say to me...or at least some of 'em....very good write! |
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Re: I hate It
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 03:01:44 PM AEST
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Your poem shows the true beauty behind a friendship, and that like everything it requires work.
Good day. |
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Re: I hate It
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by Jackee_line on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 03:47:23 PM AEST
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I found this quite emotional, well written and to the point.
well done |
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Re: I hate It
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 09:00:42 AM AEST
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| your friend has a good friend |
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