|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Cant Find Me
Contributed by
lil_angel
on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 04:44:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
|
The thunder crashes
The lightning flashes
The rain pours down
Crash!
Bang!
Swish! Swish!
The floods come up
And the rain comes down
No where to run
And no where to hide
Try to run and try to hide
There is NO WHERE
You will be found
February 17th 2000
Copyright ©
lil_angel
... [
2004-04-24 16:44:34]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Cant Find Me
(User Rating: 1 )
by faithmairee on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 05:12:34 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
lovely poem...well written and very enjoyable!
Faith |
|
|
Re: Cant Find Me
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 05:41:09 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
You penned your words well. There is a lot of power and emotion stated here. Very good work for a young person.
Rita |
|
|
Re: Cant Find Me
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 08:58:25 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Swish swish? You bring out the LGBT in me! ;)
Seriously, a very appealing poem. Very well done. |
|
|
Re: Cant Find Me
(User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 01:35:10 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This Is Really A Great Write lil_angel :-)I Love It !!!!!!
And You Are A Part Of That Poem I Just Posted Hun...It Goes For Everyone Here At YPDC !!!!!!!!
*******LoVe**AnGeL*********
******************************* |
|
|
Re: Cant Find Me
(User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygodslove on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 10:12:12 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| HERE IS A ROPE . TIE A KNOT AND HANG ONE. WE LOVE YOU. HERE IS A HUG. YOU GOT US YOU WILL NEVER BE ALONE. good poem. like how you express your feelings. sandy |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Site Help
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
