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My Elements
Contributed by
eviegirl
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Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 08:57:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Riding on the wings of fire,
weaving embers in my hair,
Running away from my heat's desires,
to much saddness there.
Soaring with the wild wind,
dancing colors in my eyes,
Trying to bare the faults of kin,
to much hurt, to many lies.
Riding on the frothy wake,
an untamed crashing in my soul,
Not wanting all my heart can take,
to much pain for it to hold.
Running through the wild earth,
a flower for each of my tears,
Escaping from other's selfish mirth,
to much pain to dissapear.
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eviegirl
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2004-04-24 20:57:53]
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Re: My Elements
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by Kie on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 09:39:01 PM AEST
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Spectacular imagery and a nice flow. I feel breathless just from reading it.
Excellent.
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Re: My Elements
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by Spike on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 06:02:28 AM AEST
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I realy enjoyed this one too. Rich and beautiful imagery for such a baring of the soul. A poem woven rather than written. Cudos.
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