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I'm not sure this time
Contributed by
the_story_of_the_year
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Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 01:27:47 AM in AEST
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My example has gone to waste
I guess I'm not your taste
But what is your's anyway?
Is it him?
Maybe him over there?
The guy right here?
Who, Why, Where?
It doesn't matter anymore
What's the use of my trying
It'll never work out
As long as your superficial eyes are blinding
Your "sense" of "love" that's un-dying
I'm not angry
Only dissapointed
You let me down
I'm tried of it
Now it's just annoying
You wonder why you feel this way
When you walked right in as the prey
You wish you could go back
And change yesterday
But news for you honey
The past is etched in stone
It won't be forgotten
It'll always be known
You can surpress it
Pretend it never took place
But it will come back to haunt you
And blow up in your face
Then you'll be running to me
With arms open wide
But this time I might say
I'm sorry
Good bye
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Re: I'm not sure this time
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by lil_angel on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 01:31:33 AM AEST
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This is good! i really like this part:
Then you'll be running to me
With arms open wide
But this time I might say
I'm sorry
Good bye |
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Re: I'm not sure this time
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 03:54:19 AM AEST
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WOW! awesome...i really liked this one...
hehe...
It has a very powerful flow and I like the rhythm because it reminds me of--
nah...I better not get into that...
*gazes into space*
great poem!
evoked a lot of feelings within me...
Katie |
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Re: I'm not sure this time
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by chris3btine77 on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 04:27:56 PM AEST
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| very nice flow ..... loved the ending..sounds like something i would write and definatley can relate to |
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