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Time
Contributed by
liquidsunshine
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Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 10:04:46 AM in AEST
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A dream phase hazy mist enclosing
All the edges and Im burning
Striving just to make some noise
Keep that faux smile and some poise
Oh through the world my mind is wandring
Butterfly trapped in a crystal ball
Ever seeking soothing solace
Only found in drops of melting rain
Searching for someone to hold me
Anyone to grasp me without pain
Someone who wont be as cold as
All the painful lyrics that I scrawl
Lyrics that are only squandring
Time
Smile upon my face forever
Do they know me? Sadly, never
I yearn to let someone in
Make them see the me underneath my skin
Oh in the darkness I go wandring
Gazing through the cage of my crystal ball
Finding temporary solace
As they bid me to come in from the rain
Hoping someone now will hold me
Anyone can grasp me without pain
He is the only one as bold as
The lyrics without mercy I shall scrawl
As they join with me and were squandring
Time
Woah oh oh oh oh oh oh oh
Time
Butterfly Im changing, morphing
Failed attempts Im slowly fixing
Someday you shall here my sweet song
And in your broken heart I will then belong
Someday I will get a new start
Youll be yearning to know whats in my heart
Someday in time Ill be singing
In your ears my voice is ringing
Ill be the siren coaxing you in
Youll want to see under my skin
I will finlly be in my perfect prime
And you will only long to go back in
Time
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liquidsunshine
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2004-04-25 10:04:46]
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Re: Time
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by lifefliesby on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 10:43:12 AM AEST
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I'm sorry...
I 'll always love you Chelsea
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You put "here" when it should be "hear"...
"you shall here my sweet song"
I still want to be friends... heh, I never thought I'd have to stay "still"... and I'm not sure if I have to but you are honestly one of my best/closest friends and I wlove you.
I'll talk to later, alright?
And the song...
I love it... "great write"
Love ALWAYS,
Jared
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Re: Time
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 10:59:05 AM AEST
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These are touching lyrics - the spelling errors are forgivable due to the extent of its resonance, and the depth of its meaning.
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Re: Time
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by ChrisvanOostrom on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 12:27:25 PM AEST
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Well, you're certainly not squandering time writing lyrics like this one.
Chris |
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Re: Time
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by bernard on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 03:34:46 AM AEST
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No my dear you are quite right no-one really knows youand you have expressed it beautifully with this poem.
bernard. |
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Re: Time
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by Stitch on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 07:16:09 PM AEST
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I would just love to hear you sing these beautiful words. Don't worry. The people who are worthwhile will notice you. Remember He has plans for you...good plans.
Stitch |
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Re: Time
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by eatfresh22 on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 04:16:43 PM AEST
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Very graceful style of writing you had here in this poem. I love the repetition of the title throughout the poem. I especially liked the second stanza....good metaphor and alliteration and imagery. I loved the simple phrase "melting rain." That was absolutely gorgeous. Keep up the awesome work!
~Carrie~ |
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Re: Time
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 02:53:12 PM AEST
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Beautiful and lyrical. Also sad. I hope the best for you.
Andrew |
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