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Silent Storm
Contributed by
silentrain07
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Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 11:23:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Thunder crashes, but theres no sound
Lightning flashes, rain falls to the ground
Clouds dark and grey, no shelter here, no where to stay
The earth shakes and i feel nothing
Waves crash agaisnt the rocks
Yet still, there is no sound
Not even the voices of the winds are heard
This silence is deafening, when will it break?
No one knows, i only wish they did
I wish this silent storm would end
Arian Assana
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Re: Silent Storm
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by JesusFreak313 on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 11:35:19 AM AEST
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Beautiful! I love this! I especially like the way you describe it all as being like a storm. It makes it more dramatic and almost frightening. 'This silence is deafening' - that's so awesome! A great write!
God bless,
Frances |
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Re: Silent Storm
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by eviegirl on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 12:13:04 PM AEST
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| An awsome poem. I love the way you descibed your feelings as a storm. great job! |
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Re: Silent Storm
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 08:48:29 AM AEST
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"Waves crash agaisnt the rocks
Yet still, there is no sound"
These are vivid sentiments and images. I was very impressed by this quote.
Well done, and Welcome. |
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