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Sinister As You Were
Contributed by
Exodus-On-Life
on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 01:53:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Sinister victims
The battle's never won
Bite the bullet
Clip the gun
Arching curling anything
The spirit's dead within
Glass cut heart out
Broken sharding begin
Tripping, falling
Hold the gate
Losing and wishing
Life's beholder, filled with hate
Fuel from the lighter
Tear up my blue eyes
Suck in the poison
Alone my spirit cries
Sinister wishes
Killing spirit let be
Bite the bullet
Come fight with me
Despair creates sorrow
Curling fingers wrap the throat
Blood spills onto anything
Grasping note to beautiful note
Sad song willingly
Singing all alone
The hateful acts are deepening
The times I love to condone
Really wishing always
Clip my wings and die
I'm crying out for anything
As this fuel irritates my eye
Wishing always for darkness
The smiles on your face
I wish to rip your eyes out
The poison with which you lace
Stuck in the rut of emptiness
Conquering words let be
I'm trying to get through in time
And you're only killing me
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Re: Sinister As You Were
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by reprobate on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 08:29:27 PM AEST
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a little help...not quite sure where you're taking this. is it a love or anger type? just didn't find/see the markers after the third read. am interested to find out which of the phrases is the key.
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Re: Sinister As You Were
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by dead_beauty on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 10:00:58 PM AEST
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| Very powerful piece, though I'm not sure what it's about. Maybe a clue? :)~ravenghost |
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Re: Sinister As You Were
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by tamilyn on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 03:24:31 AM AEST
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Someone angered or hurt you, yes? Like you, I write when I am in pain. Well done!
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