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Probing
Contributed by
parkman
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Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 03:47:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I'm in your head, deep in your mind
Penetrating your inner most thoughts, what will I find
Your wildest dream, or nightmare, maybe
Suck them out, your mind I will free
I'll know what you're thinking, every minute of the day
Know what makes you work, what makes you play
I'll see what you're looking at, when your asleep
As I probe each moment, probe really deep
You'll not know I'm here, not know I've been
But when you awake, you'll awake with a scream
Your mind will be empty, except for the pain
You will see nothing, but the darkness, from where you came
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2004-04-25 15:47:59]
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Re: Probing
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by reprobate on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 06:48:27 PM AEST
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| pervasively kewl!!! |
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Re: Probing
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 10:36:06 PM AEST
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| that was interesting. cool though. |
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Re: Probing
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by tamilyn on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 03:18:24 AM AEST
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| I like this. I write like this sometimes. It reminds me of some of my own poetry. I'm looking forward to reading more by you. |
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