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One Last Breath
Contributed by
silentrain07
on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 03:56:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Alone in a corner
Thinking about my life
Nothing but the sound of rain
To keep me company
Looking back on all my memories
It seems like there's so much to live for
But there's not
Pull out the razor, slide it across my wrist
Once, twice, three times more
Until the job is done...
And as i lie here on the ground
Bleeding, thinking, waiting
Anticipation drowns me
It hurts so much to wait
'Til i take in that one last breath
I'm going numb now
I can barely breath
I blink just one last time...
And I'm gone
Arian Assana
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silentrain07
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2004-04-25 15:56:12]
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Re: One Last Breath
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 04:01:56 PM AEST
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| i can totally relate to this, i have thought about suicide countless times, especially in the last few months, it seems i have nothing to live for, but i always find a reason to stay, and after i wrote my latest suicide poem on this site, i have talked to many people who helped me through it. and i have realized that suicide is never the answer |
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Re: One Last Breath
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 04:04:11 PM AEST
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| ^ oops forgot to leave my names, JustJames |
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Re: One Last Breath
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by mickie on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 12:22:09 PM AEST
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i always think that if i leave this earth by my own hand, i will be better for it. i totally understand. what has happened to you that you want out so badly? (if you mind sharing?)
i will listen. that's what i'm good at. contact me please, if you can or want to. try to stay strong,okay? |
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