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dark angel
Contributed by
lostinmyself
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Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 04:11:23 PM in AEST
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i could be your dark angel,
be here to guide and hate you,
take you under my wings,
love, care and protect you,
in discontented happiness,
we could rule each other,
together in our twisted darkness,
this crown is big enough for both of us,
we would be happy in our misery
and i would i hate everything about you,
and i would love everything about you,
and you would love/loath me too,
deceased perfection..
you make me feel broken...
...but you complete me with your darkness,
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2004-04-25 16:11:23]
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Re: dark angel
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by Kie on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 04:14:41 PM AEST
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Dark and resonates with love and hate.
Very interesting and unique.
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Re: dark angel
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 05:31:35 PM AEST
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| Oooo! Beautiful twistedness! I liked it! I wrote a poem kind of like this in the sense that a lot of the words canceled out n' stuff like that. |
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Re: dark angel
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by kidpoet_213 on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 05:56:42 PM AEST
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Whoa!! Very interesting indeed... talk about the difference betwwen night and day... love and hate...
WOW!! Neat poem... I liked it... keep writing..
~Donna~ |
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Re: dark angel
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by arden on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 10:06:21 PM AEST
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i love love love this! wow!
amazing work.
keep it up.
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Re: dark angel
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by Hurretje on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 08:59:21 AM AEST
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Hail to you, dark angel..may the thorned corwn fit the both of us...
Hugs,
Hur |
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Re: dark angel
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by buccaneer on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 08:57:21 PM AEST
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it nice and i think you wouldn't mind my saying i would love to be both the good and bad as long as you will be there.people change but life dosen't since you will be there in the heart it#s better to know life is not a bed of roses.
lovely poem. |
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