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ODE
Contributed by
rhei76
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Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 04:14:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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You don't know
Soon I'll drive into the night and on past the day A hundred and ninety two Hours so far away
You know
Using my dreams I will find my way back to you Using these things I will show you, I love you
You know
Four years, were to long I guess I have to be a man And tell you, And show you I was wrong, I was wrong
I'm sorry
For the years I had left I was searching Now, that is the best-excuse Since me leaving
I was wrong I was wrong, now I'm, I'm on my way Yes, you know now
I was wrong
I never wanted to misbehaive But that's what I've done NOW IT'S TIME FOR ME To return Come back home Tell to you I was wrong Tell to you I am sorry And let you know If you want anything, need I'm right over here I'm sorry
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Re: ODE
(User Rating: 1 ) by lil_angel on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 04:56:58 PM AEST (User
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Very well done! Great job! |
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Re: ODE
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kie on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 05:54:20 PM AEST (User
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Oh this just touched my heart it really cried out to me. I hope everything works out for you. Maybe you should show this person the poem???
Just an idea.
Kie |
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Re: ODE
(User Rating: 1 ) by jaeann on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 01:33:15 PM AEST (User
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aaawwww......when they've erred and they're truly sorry........that's when they're the most adorable........i hope you're forgiven........ |
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