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Mirror Hag
Contributed by
Merry
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Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 06:31:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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That face it haunts me
Dour reflection in the light
Mocks all attempts to conceal
Crows feet and gray hair
Teeth not straight
And oh my God
Is that a hair on my chin?
Who is this hag?
When did she move in here?
With sagging jowls and drooping lids
Unholy crone what do you want?
Stole my pretty creamy skin
Leave me with pursed lips
And wrinkled neck
This is my lifes reward
To outlive my youthfulness
Memories of silky skin
And firm breasts
To stand here looking at some hag
Whose wisdom fills a thousand years
And eyes that shine as bright as stars
She has replaced the girl I was
With the woman I have become
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Copyright ©
Merry
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2004-04-25 18:31:08]
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Re: Mirror Hag
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by Kie on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 06:39:47 PM AEST
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Rollllllllllllllllllllllllllling!
Gosh I laughed so hard.
Wonderful poem.
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Re: Mirror Hag
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 06:40:20 PM AEST
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lol, gaille this is so cute, and wow, shes in mine too! *thinks the nerve of her* although it has a serious tone, and ooo id like to be young again too, but we are both aged like fine wine, and i for one know you are a beautiful woman so your mirrors a liar lol, huggies n' love ya, nessa
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Re: Mirror Hag
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 08:20:20 PM AEST
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if I were to see your reflection my dear, I would see a woman of style and class whose inner beauty would shine like a nova. ;o)
Roses
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Re: Mirror Hag
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by Stitch on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 08:25:05 PM AEST
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Sigh. Know this feeling too well. Just came from a 60th BD party for a friend. She hasn't changed in 20 years. I gotta buy her secret. Interesting perspective---universal and personal all at once.
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