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Forgotten
Contributed by
tissueshaveissues
on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 06:46:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Icy blue eyes stare, death within them.
Lying on the ground unable to move
People laughing in the background
The hard and heavy breath stops.
Trapped in a small box, the laughing grows louder
People running by
Never stopping to look at the cold blue eyes
Left to stare
Forever more captured by tragedy
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2004-04-25 18:46:14]
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Re: Forgotten
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 08:38:27 AM AEST
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Deep perspective. I found this vivid and easy to read and comprehend the images you were showing.
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