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In The Darkness He Awaits
Contributed by
JadedExistence
on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 12:20:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Silver blade glistening in the night
Drops of crimson sparkling in the light
A sadistic smile and evil in his eyes
Anticipation of pain, torture, and lies
Licking his lips when he hears the screams
Destroying their souls, shattering their dreams
Feeling the wind that howls in the dark
Searching in the shadows, looking for his mark
A pretty blonde walking down the hill
His eyes gleam as he goes in for the kill
Her lifeless body falls to the ground
While he slips away without a sound
In the darkness he awaits
To bring more into the hell he creates
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2004-04-26 00:20:38]
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Re: In The Darkness He Awaits
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by Rylo on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 12:39:14 AM AEST
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| This was really hot, I loved every word of it very dark. Great job. |
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Re: In The Darkness He Awaits
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by blondie_64865 on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 01:12:10 AM AEST
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| your poem has alot to say about the dark side which stands so very true in these times. very good poem! |
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Re: In The Darkness He Awaits
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 01:22:56 AM AEST
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| excellent poem, i think i met this guy once, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: In The Darkness He Awaits
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 01:53:32 AM AEST
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| this is grerat, no, it's better than great! |
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Re: In The Darkness He Awaits
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by arden on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 08:33:13 AM AEST
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WOW..... wow...
i LOVE this!
so dark and chilling and just plane creepy.
the flow was perfect the writing was outstanding. wonderful work.
again i love this.
Arden |
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Re: In The Darkness He Awaits
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by jaeann on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 12:51:14 PM AEST
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| deliciously lovely......excellent write....... |
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Re: In The Darkness He Awaits
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by Cynthia on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 06:41:04 PM AEST
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| Jaded, this is a perfect piece. I am enjoying writing dark poems myself. I'll be reading more of yours. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: In The Darkness He Awaits
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by blueheart on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 10:18:01 PM AEST
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| Wow, this inspires me to write more dark poetry. Great write. Loved every word of it. :) |
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