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Continuum
Contributed by
Hurretje
on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 04:24:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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The deepest night
Utter black
That stuns me
Is not dark enough
And the moon smiles
Soft pastel
Her face breaths comfort
That burns my soul
And the stars twinkle
Laughing children
That wink at me
In roaring scorn
And the suns rises
She chases the darkness
That flies
In shame
And the world turns
Blue and green
A true paradise
Without mercy
Clocks, why do you tick?
Wiping the hours
Like dust from a rug
Forgotten and unwanted
I listen
But I cannot hear you
I look
But I cannot see you
My memories
Are splintered
By the ever rising tide
And the always falling waves
I listen
But I only hear the birds sing
I look
But you're lost between the blooming blossoms
It's spring
*ever again*
The land explodes
*ever again*
In variegated rejoice
*ever again*
Old flows to new
*ever again*
Clouds, why is it only you that cry?
Copyright ©
Hurretje
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2004-04-26 04:24:36]
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Re: Continuum
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 04:27:23 AM AEST
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this is beautiful:) hugs n' love, nessa
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Re: Continuum
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 04:32:54 AM AEST
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this is very beautiful and emotional too..
keep up the great work.
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Re: Continuum
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 04:35:02 AM AEST
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An amazing write, sounds good read out loud.
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Re: Continuum
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by venkat on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 05:18:45 AM AEST
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| wonderful imagery..a classic write..though sadly touches me, it is a priceless art work ..I can also say its a masterpiece... venkat |
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Re: Continuum
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by PottyPoet on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 05:25:00 AM AEST
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| Well done. The words you have picked are beautiful. Great imagary. |
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Re: Continuum
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by arden on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 08:40:50 AM AEST
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i love this. im in awe at how beautiful this was. a perfect write.
just loved it....
Arden |
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Re: Continuum
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by Stitch on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 09:04:50 AM AEST
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Such depth, beauty, and expanse. I really like your stuff.
Stitch |
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Re: Continuum
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by silent on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 10:15:03 AM AEST
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| 5 stars... |
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Re: Continuum
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by reilt on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 10:57:11 AM AEST
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| such beautiful words...i love this poem. it's just so lovely and amazing |
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Re: Continuum
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by bernard on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 03:17:44 AM AEST
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Hurretje you have over trumped yourself with this piece of well written verse. I am more impressed with each new poem that send. great Keep em coming. cheers.
bernard. |
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Re: Continuum
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 02:54:12 AM AEST
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This is more than excellent. I love a poem where nature is personified with emotion, and it is especially well-done here. This is truly a timeless work, as beautiful to me as it would have been to the ears of a listener to an ancient Greek, Celtic or Hebrew elegist.
Bravo!
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Re: Continuum
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by Silent-No-More on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 09:25:19 AM AEST
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Amazing. Simply amazing.
*** Thanks for your comment on THIEF--- much appreciated! |
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