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~? Lost ?~
Contributed by
Cynthia
on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 09:01:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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She runs through the
dark depths of the woods,
she doesn't know
what she runs from.
Is there someting chasing her?
Is she afraid to be alone?
Is she running away from life itself?
What is it she runs from?
She is lost,
she stops to look around....
there's nothing,
but dead silence.
Where is she headed?
She doesn't know.
The mist settles in the
depths of darkness,
she hears noises.
Where are they coming from?
She looks....
but sees nothing.
She is lost to the night,
she runs....
there is nowhere to hide,
the darkness scares her.
There is no light
from the moon
to help guide her way,
the wind howls
through the trees.
She stops....
her heart beats
hard and fast,
as she looks around
she realises she's lost.
Lost to the darkness
of the woods forever.
Copyright Cynthia Jones
Apr.25/2004
Copyright ©
Cynthia
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2004-04-26 09:01:41]
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Re: ~? Lost ?~
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by Hurretje on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 09:19:47 AM AEST
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Wonderful poem...sometimes being lost is scared enough on its own... Especially when you're on the run for an unknown enemy..and yes, I can so imagine why Arden inspired you..:-)
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Hur |
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Re: ~? Lost ?~
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by arden on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 09:27:06 AM AEST
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ohhhhh this was creepy!!
i LOVED it. so dark and chilling and just amazing. nice imagery. awesome write.
i hope to see more like this :)
Arden |
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Re: ~? Lost ?~
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 09:53:39 AM AEST
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| wonderful write, cynthia, image filled; the saying 'there is nothing to fear but fear itself' keeps running through my mind so i thought to mention it, for whatever reason, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: ~? Lost ?~
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by LiquidChaos on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 10:33:56 AM AEST
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awesome. very creepy and also, at the same time heart-wrenching. because sometimes, even if we arent truely running from some unknown in the woods, we do run from life itself. keep it up!
addie
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Re: ~? Lost ?~
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by reilt on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 10:40:01 AM AEST
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| fantastic...wonderful imagery...i loved it |
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Re: ~? Lost ?~
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 11:04:17 AM AEST
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Now she is pulling you into her dark world, lol. This is good. If anyone writes dark they should fashion it after Arden. She is one of the best here. Good work, Cynthia, you learn well from the dark child.
LOL
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Re: ~? Lost ?~
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 05:21:03 AM AEST
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| Aww..there is no problem.. you have found that girl in the forest..take care of her...very well written...venkat |
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