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Complete
Contributed by
reilt
on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 10:38:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Shed this sorry skin
In the winds of change.
Turn this upside down,
Inside out.
Rest a while with it.
Mind over matter.
Struggled with the truth,
Reflections, Misconceptions,
Altered ideas
And faltered without doubt.
Even still...
Crawl outside this cocoon
Of shame and hate...
Cast off
All that fails
And metamorphosise
Until Complete.
Copyright ©
reilt
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2004-04-26 10:38:16]
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Re: Complete
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by arden on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 11:05:55 AM AEST
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i really liked this.
it was written so well.
great job, keep it up.
Arden |
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Re: Complete
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by Broken-glass on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 11:07:24 AM AEST
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| Good poem. Bit like one I wrote the other day, although I did not post: using the idea of being cocooned and shedding skin etc. |
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Re: Complete
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by bernard on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 11:11:58 AM AEST
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Strong Poem, I often feel the way you have written. I think that we all at one time or another metamorphise into another way of life.
bernard. |
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Re: Complete
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by Stitch on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 11:38:16 AM AEST
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Mmmm, I like this. Intriguing from the first line. Nice work.
Stitch |
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Re: Complete
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by Black13 on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 12:12:14 PM AEST
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I like how you wrote this and how you worded it. I like the flow of it.
Very nicely done. |
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Re: Complete
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by Hurretje on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 05:40:48 AM AEST
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All these words build a world...
Wonderful.
Greetz,
Hur |
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