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Doodling
Contributed by
humphdj
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Monday, 15th July 2002 @ 06:15:04 AM in AEST
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I must admit, I do enjoy
To sit down with a pen and toy
With words and letters tumbled round
Arranged to make a pleasant sound
Ideas and memories running thick
To get them rhyming is the obvious trick
The pen moves quick and the ink will flow
But never in the places you want it to go
When you read your rhyme after some time spent
Its nice if it says what you actually meant
If it says something else, then dont give up hope
Pick up your pen and continue to grope
Copyright ©
humphdj
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2002-07-15 06:15:04]
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Re: Doodling
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by Firefly on
Monday, 15th July 2002 @ 07:34:11 AM AEST
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Hi Dave,
This is very pleasant to read as I totally agree with the concept.thanx again for your comments on my works...the comments really do inspire.
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Re: Doodling
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by Chrissie on
Monday, 15th July 2002 @ 08:59:02 AM AEST
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I like this a lot and very much agree...
"It's nice if it says what you actually meant"
Chrissie x
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Re: Doodling
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by Thumbsucker on
Monday, 15th July 2002 @ 09:17:56 AM AEST
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Hi Dave,
Glad to see you here, it`s my first time back to the new site.
"Doodling" rates a 5 on the Thumbsucker scale. |
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Re: Doodling
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by lil_hummingbird on
Monday, 15th July 2002 @ 09:45:48 PM AEST
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| I like this one alot.good write. |
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Re: Doodling
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by chatabox on
Wednesday, 17th July 2002 @ 12:44:47 AM AEST
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I am a doodling dued too!.....
your doodling turns into excellant poetry too, mine just seems to end in the bin!...
I just loved this me dear! |
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