|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
The Loser
Contributed by
tissueshaveissues
on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 04:56:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
|
You laugh and point at her
Mocking everything about her
Every night she cries
She Cries because of you
She hides her pain and misery
She knows it'd only make you happy
One day it'd become too much
Too much for her to handle
And shell crack
Crack beneath the force
The force of your intolerable cruelty
But what do you care?
You just point and laugh
Copyright ©
tissueshaveissues
... [
2004-04-26 16:56:05]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: The Loser
(User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 05:27:42 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Well done! Great job! |
|
|
Re: The Loser
(User Rating: 1 )
by New_York_Chick on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 07:05:35 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| true to life, that's what makes you poem so good |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
