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Self-destruction
Contributed by
XxJesxXx420xX
on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 05:25:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I use a knife to end my life Stabbing at my wrist giving it another twist Blood gushing out as I scream and shout But I'm still not dead and that's what I dread So now I take some pills hoping it kills Now my body's in pain and I'm going insane But yet I'm not dead what else do I need to shed? I did everything I can think of all that suicidal stuff Wait, I just thought of something that will make me turn to nothing This idea has to be this idea will make me see That death is just a few hours away and death will just make my day This will be a little fun all I need is a shotgun I'll get it loaded and be ready and hold it to my head nice and steady The trigger I see, I will pull so I can finally reach my goal 5...4...3...2...1... My life is now finally done
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2004-04-26 17:25:22] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Self-destruction
(User Rating: 1 ) by lil_angel on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 05:34:46 PM AEST (User
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Harsh poem! But well stated! |
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Re: Self-destruction
(User Rating: 1 ) by Soulless on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 07:08:34 PM AEST (User
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Wonderful yet spine tingling. As I was reading this poem I felt a little of the emotion shine throught.
Kisses,
~Soulless~ |
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Re: Self-destruction
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 08:40:18 PM AEST (User
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This is a well written poem. It stirrs up emotions and makes you think. I like the part about twisting the knife in the wrist it's disgusting but gives good imagery. awsome poem! |
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