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Staring Into The Distance
Contributed by
diamond_tears
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Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 05:41:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I sit at the window ,staring.
I see a world of pain,
And my eyes have to strain.
Everything seems so distant from me,
Is there something Im missing? Maybe a key?
To unlock the happiness,
Instead of all this mess,
Surrounding me as I curl up alone,
While the world looks on at me and groans.
Theres the happiness out at sea,
It seems so very far from me.
I sit at the window, staring.
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2004-04-26 17:41:04]
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Re: Staring Into The Distance
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by sugar0986 on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 06:07:06 PM AEST
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This was a really good poem.
~Brittany~ |
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Re: Staring Into The Distance
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by kidpoet_213 on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 06:16:12 PM AEST
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This one just reaches out and grabs u... and takes u in through the pain felt...
This is one heck of a great poem... keep up the writing... I hope one day soon u find ur key to happiness... I dislike seeing ppl sad... and yet that's what I write about too... lol
~Donna~ |
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