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+++ The Graveyard +++
Contributed by
Cynthia
on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 06:28:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The living walk amongst the dead,
the dead hold secrets
unknown to the living,
there are unmarked graves sites.
Whom do they belong to?
Noone knows.
There is a dense fog
that hovers in the graveyard,
something is about to happen.
The clock in the town
strikes at twelve midnight,
the graves start to open up,
the living get swallowed
and travel to the depths of Hell.
There is a stench
of rotten flesh and mud
that lingers in the air,
the moon is covered
by thick, black clouds.
The ground closes up,
awaiting to be opened up again,
at the stroke of midnight.
Copyright Cynthia Jones
Apr.26/2004
Copyright ©
Cynthia
... [
2004-04-26 18:28:09]
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Re: +++ The Graveyard +++
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by arden on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 06:33:42 PM AEST
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such darkness and spine chilling work!
i love it!!
wow i am amazed at how good you are.
awesomely done. cant wait for more.
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Re: +++ The Graveyard +++
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 06:37:44 PM AEST
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| very dark, very beautiful. |
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Re: +++ The Graveyard +++
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by emystar on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 07:40:55 PM AEST
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I really get into this kind of write but u r a good writer.
U did a great job with this.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: +++ The Graveyard +++
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 07:56:08 PM AEST
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Ewwwwwwwwwww, first Arden and now you. Get yourself back to Sunshine City! You did a good job here, g/f. Too bad I am not into dark poety. We could have a threesome.
LOL
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Re: +++ The Graveyard +++
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by Kie on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 08:13:34 PM AEST
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This was a different kind of style for you and you are GREAT at it.
Although it is dark here and i'll probably scare myself to death it was very enjoyable.
Kie |
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Re: +++ The Graveyard +++
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 12:24:53 AM AEST
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| ah, lady..this is chilling.. venkat |
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Re: +++ The Graveyard +++
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 04:42:41 AM AEST
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Short and to the point. This place sounds like my home town . . .
good write. |
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Re: +++ The Graveyard +++
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 12:55:36 PM AEST
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| vivid images, could picture it all in my mind, *looks over shoulder* hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: +++ The Graveyard +++
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by Sonibe on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 05:25:38 PM AEST
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....Ah yes, home again....glad to see someone else from the same place I am.....bravo, bravo...
Sonibe |
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