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My Last Breath
Contributed by
devil_child
on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 06:33:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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The darkness piercing
all around
the nameless faces
make no sound
There waiting for me
to finally fall
into the void
where eternity claims all
There's no escaping
my fate is sealed
my heart is hardened
I no longer feel
The blood runs thick
coursing so fast
as I fall into nothing
I see visions of the past
My mind begins to fade
as i'm taken by death
and in these last moments
I draw my last breath
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2004-04-26 18:33:17]
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Re: My Last Breath
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by Twitch06 on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 09:08:57 PM AEST
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| killing yourself takes no pride. You never get to see the world with you very young eyes. you need to see whats beyond your front door and look to see whats really great out there. as im writing this, i think i should take my own advice, for i have wanted to take "my last breath" also. but, take life to the fullest extent and see for yourself, for that it is better to live and see the world, instead of standing at your door step and looking into the world you already know. |
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Re: My Last Breath
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by 0o_Jelly_Bean_o0 on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 02:24:01 AM AEST
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This is a good write, I like this bit
There's no escaping
my fate is sealed
my heart is hardened
I no longer feel
I hope you keep writing.
- Stacy |
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