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Stitched
Contributed by
Soulless
on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 07:05:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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My soul reflects right through your eyes
I figured out your hidden secret
But mine sees through your disguise
Ill be waiting for you to convince me otherwise
Chorus:
It was you who followed me on those rainy days
The one my heart beats against its gaze
You I heard breathing in the darkness
You stitched me
But you cant end me
There's something here I see
Yet I cant define the picture clear
My dreams conceive me farther away
In my mind I still hear
You speak to me softly, freely
CHORUS
You believed in me
You created me
Still I am nothing but an error
On your piece of paper
Youll come to find
My marking wont erase so easily
I wont let your light blot me out again
You betrayed me
You forgot me
You cant stop me
CHORUS
Copyright ©
Soulless
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2004-04-26 19:05:47]
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Re: Stitched
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 07:36:18 PM AEST
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| so gothic, so glorious. I enjoyed this very much. Thank you for teh wonderful write. |
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Re: Stitched
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by dead_beauty on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 07:49:54 PM AEST
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| Hi, there are so many brilliant lines in this piece that set it apart from average "dark poetry". I loved it! :)~ravenghost |
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Re: Stitched
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by blueheart on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 08:15:17 PM AEST
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| The flow of words were wonderful. Great write. |
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Re: Stitched
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 01:09:59 AM AEST
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very vividly written, it touched my heart, hugs n' love, nessa
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