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Buzz
Contributed by
marsh62287
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Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 08:28:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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crazy face
tempted hair
tected skin
of this girl
i see one a day
whoms smile makes me seek
all the love i cannot keep
with beauty exploding
into the world
one awesome mind
this one brunette
whom acts so blonde
can tempt me so
with mind
body
and power
exploding from within her soul
i dont know how i feel
but in all my dreams
ive ever seen
the look i saw
for the girl
i will forever have
looked just like her
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marsh62287
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2004-04-26 20:28:32]
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Re: Buzz
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 08:46:03 PM AEST
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Nothing more to say than simply astounding....
said with so few words, yet they all have SO much meaning---- once again, applause!
=)
Love,
Ellen |
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Re: Buzz
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by kidpoet_213 on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 09:44:35 PM AEST
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Astounding... awesome... what is there to say?
So few words... but a lot of meanoing is tucked away hidden in there... grea job...
~Donna~ |
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Re: Buzz
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 10:33:22 PM AEST
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I know I'm reading this from an odd perspective, but the last two lines in the poem seem to leave open the interpretation that the first person character of the poem is the girl, and she experiences autogynephilic eroticism.
Good write...I thought it was well worth reading. |
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