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na 2
Contributed by
light
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Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 02:42:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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As the waves move
Flowing with grace and gentleness
They massage the foundations
Of the Earths core
Leaving a soothing sensation
Of something natural...
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2004-04-27 02:42:28]
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Re: na 2
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 06:18:57 AM AEST
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Interesting, for a throwaway untitled piece.
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Re: na 2
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by Tinkkerbelle on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 08:19:42 PM AEST
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| Decently written, but kind of bland. |
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Re: na 2
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by reprobate on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 02:39:01 AM AEST
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you've got something
thanks for sharing |
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Re: na 2
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by Overstated on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 05:06:26 PM AEST
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very nice - short and nice well done...
feel free to comment on my poems... |
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