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Tangled Web
Contributed by
PottyPoet
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Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 04:34:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Tangled web of useless faith
that I'll never need
Washed up memories hit me hard
and wipe my blind mind clean.
Conditional love is what I bare
and hope is whatI seek
Waiting for life to unwind itself
before this cuts me too deep.
Wanting freedom is my alibi
it's money wasted in my wishing well
Asking for something I cannot have
People whisper "only time will tell"
You can take your morals and rules and lies
and throw them to to wind
For I have tried my hardest through this
although for some pleasures I have sinned.
Tangled web of useless faith
that one day will be mine
Unleash its hope and trust for you
that day, the real me you will find.
Copyright ©
PottyPoet
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2004-04-27 04:34:59]
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Re: Tangled Web
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 04:38:45 AM AEST
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Interesting write. Written like a pro.
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: Tangled Web
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by keilajo on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 04:39:26 AM AEST
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| I thought this was wonderful! A+++++++++. One of the best I have read. Thank you so much. |
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Re: Tangled Web
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 09:44:52 PM AEST
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| nice. |
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