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Puffs
Contributed by
GeorgeJamesDelgado
on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 10:09:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Look! Can you see them,
up above in the sky?
Why there are puffs of clouds!
White souffles floating,
growing, shaping and redesigning
themselves.
Oh do you remember when we
were very young?
We would stare at the sky;
At the white clouds that we
would name, as in a game.
The figures that we thought
would appear; a rabbit, a castle.
People figures that would
soon disfigure themselves.
Now I am old.
My thoughts are lucid about
life, and its strife.
Experiences that have made
me wise.
Love's meaning has grown
appreciatively more mature.
I nuture love's precious lessons.
Puffs appear differently now!
One cloud, same shape.
Your lovely face.
Years of changing puffs, have
grown into a portrait of...
You!
Copyright ©
GeorgeJamesDelgado
... [
2004-04-27 10:09:35]
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Re: Puffs
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by Alli on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 10:37:43 AM AEST
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| Very beautiful, clever. |
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Re: Puffs
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by Tinkkerbelle on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 08:27:15 PM AEST
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| Unique and refreshing. |
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Re: Puffs
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by reprobate on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 02:44:23 AM AEST
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can't be that old if you're still looking at the clouds!
thanks for sharing |
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