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Diamond Tears
Contributed by
diamond_tears
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Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 05:51:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
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One tear rolls down a cheek,
Like a raindrop on a window,
Glistening in the sun,
A reflection of the pain inside.
Feeling alone, tears fall,
As if from nowhere, the flood gates open.
Tiny droplets of sadness.
The dont show the overpowering waterfall inside.
Twinkling like the stars,
Slipping over the wrinkles.
Light, soft, blinking...
Diamond Tears
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2004-04-27 17:51:15]
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Re: Diamond Tears
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by sugar0986 on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 06:04:57 PM AEST
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I'm sorry that you feel like this, but this was a really good poem though.
~Brittany~ |
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Re: Diamond Tears
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 06:25:36 PM AEST
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The imagery beautiful. Although sad it pulls at the heart and you have lots of talent.
I'm impressed and will look for your writes in the future.
Kie |
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Re: Diamond Tears
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by kidpoet_213 on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 06:37:33 PM AEST
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WOW!!! I think I'm becoming a fan of urs here... very beautiful and very expressive again... keep writing... one day maybe u'll be able to not cry those expensive tears ur crying... LOL I'm sorry for ur pain... wish there was something I could do or say...
I'll just pray...
~Donna~ |
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Re: Diamond Tears
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 06:42:06 PM AEST
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| very pretty:) hugs n' love, nessa |
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Re: Diamond Tears
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by blueheart on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 08:01:37 PM AEST
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I love, absolutely love poems about tears. And this was beautiful. The imagery used was magnificent and it radiated pain and sadness at the same time.
'Tiny droplets of sadness.
The dont show the overpowering waterfall inside.' I loved that line. Great write.
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Re: Diamond Tears
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 08:27:35 PM AEST
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this was beautiful but Im sorry for your pain seems to be going around of late..........
hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Diamond Tears
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by Soulless on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 05:11:03 PM AEST
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Very beautifully written,
Kisses,
~Soulless~ |
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Re: Diamond Tears
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by surfer_boy_lost on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 01:06:43 AM AEST
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| So evocative, i think many people will be able to identify with you through this. |
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Re: Diamond Tears
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 07:02:36 PM AEST
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| Awsome. That was really good. I'll checvk out more later. |
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