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Questions
Contributed by
TokenBad
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Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 06:42:34 PM in AEST
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Questions
Am I going crazy,
All my life a little hazy?
Am I going insane,
How can I avoid the endless pain?
My world is falling apart,
How can I heal this bleeding heart?
My nights are full of sorrow,
Will I leave this world tomorrow?
My days are full of sunshine,
But how can I ease my troubled mind?
Will I find love,
Or will it fall from above?
Questions fill my mind,
But answers I can not find.
Can I find the path,
To lead me from my troubled past?
With all the Questions that I ask,
How long will I last?
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TokenBad
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2004-04-27 18:42:34]
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Re: Questions
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by JadedExistence on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 06:49:51 PM AEST
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Beautiful flow and well written. Great structure, an overall amazing write. Very common questions for people to have and the hardest to answer, hope you start feeling better about your life and all the things you don't know about it. Welcome to YPDC, hope to see more from you soon.
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Re: Questions
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by mickie on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 11:02:33 AM AEST
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| this is really a beautiful poem. i often ask myself these questions but i never get an answer. keep up the writing. keep in touch. i like to talk to people who can ask these questions. people who know how i feel. it will get better. you have to believe that, okay? |
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Re: Questions
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 09:37:37 PM AEST
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| very well written |
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