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~~ Rain Dance ~~
Contributed by
lovingwhispers
on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 07:30:17 PM in AEST
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Desire wild,touch of fire,scarlet nails trace
Flesh of velvet,dancing fingers,fantasies embrace
Graced before the window,of raindrops on the pane
Her curves adorned in lace,move without refrain
Writhing on the covers,her dance has taken flight
A silhouette so sensual,beyond soft candlelight
Rising to the call,of her carnal ebb and flow
Floating through the waters,so warm and sweet below
Rhythmic as her breathing,sighs paint misty air
Colourful phantasms,as with ecstasy she shares
Desire wild,touch of fire,scarlet nails trace
Flesh of velvet,dancing fingers,fantasies embrace
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Re: ~~ Rain Dance ~~
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 07:34:07 PM AEST
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Oooooh. I think my hubby and I will read this one in front of the fire tonight. Nice stuff.
Stitch |
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Re: ~~ Rain Dance ~~
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by sugar0986 on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 07:39:19 PM AEST
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This was a beautiful poem.
~Brittany~ |
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Re: ~~ Rain Dance ~~
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by blueheart on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 07:47:14 PM AEST
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| This was so captivating. The imagery you used were brilliant. Such a beautiful poem written to perfection. Lovely write. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: ~~ Rain Dance ~~
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 07:49:37 PM AEST
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romantic and sensual beautiful
Michelle
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Re: ~~ Rain Dance ~~
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 08:02:58 PM AEST
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soft sensual well done
Shari |
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Re: ~~ Rain Dance ~~
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 08:05:14 PM AEST
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Sensual, inviting and enticing. LW poetry to the core. The searching heart will surely fall under your spell with this one.
Beautifully written as always.
Larry |
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Re: ~~ Rain Dance ~~
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by Merry on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 08:17:16 PM AEST
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steaming up the windows witih this write - nicely done
turning on the fan
merry |
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Re: ~~ Rain Dance ~~
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by eviegirl on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 08:29:45 PM AEST
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| Absolutley beautiful! I love how you mixed the sensual experience with the rain. Just wonderful. |
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Re: ~~ Rain Dance ~~
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 09:05:22 PM AEST
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| muy excelente. |
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Re: ~~ Rain Dance ~~
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 03:23:07 AM AEST
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| hummm..very rhythmic fantastc dance..venkat |
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Re: ~~ Rain Dance ~~
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by Black13 on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 01:59:48 PM AEST
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I think you say it best it your sig.: Dancing Is A Perpendicular Expression Of A Horizontal Desire
You are still writing very beautifully. |
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Re: ~~ Rain Dance ~~
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 04:00:12 AM AEST
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| Soft. gentle, sensual, & beautiful...... Awesome poem!!! |
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Re: ~~ Rain Dance ~~
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by Gentledove on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 07:11:19 PM AEST
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A very sensual write. Love it.
Gentledove |
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Re: ~~ Rain Dance ~~
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by RobertKilpatrick on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 10:08:16 PM AEST
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| yes . very nice flow to this.. like it |
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