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Losing Edge
Contributed by
essentially9
on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 09:53:02 PM in AEST
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Losing Edge
I'm losing my edge
And my life
With one mistake
It's cost my life
And that mistake
Is more punishment
Than my death
And I can't stand
To face myself
Remember the feelings felt
Because those feelings
Have mistakenly taken me
And thought for me
And my heart
Is breaking from the outside
Within me broke
When I learned the truth
And the truth overcomes
And sheds light on my life
And it hurts more
Than the darkness
But that's my life
As I lose my edge
And my life
With one mistake
It cost my life
But the end
That's coming
Will be my sacrifice
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essentially9
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2004-04-27 21:53:02]
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Re: Losing Edge
(User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 10:27:32 PM AEST
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| i could never sacrifice you |
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Re: Losing Edge
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by afterdark on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 09:00:44 PM AEST
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| Jesus you know after reading your poems new and old..Christ I could definitly spend time with you..ONline and off..Now our tensions may kill us but damnitt you make me stay tuned.. |
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